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【原创】七绝·怒问王母

2013-08-14 11:37:02| 分类：绝句 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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七绝·怒问王母（新韵）

——兼和云中的梦、田耕君

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牛郎织女泪汪汪，岁岁七夕哭断肠。

怒指天庭问王母，为何拆散美鸳鸯？

附：云中的梦君原玉——

桂浓幽菊吐馨香, 明月星辉绽瑞芳.

天上人间团相聚, 同心共织展前望.

附：田耕君原玉——

七绝（新韵）和云中的梦“七夕寄情”

情人节里尽馨香，天上人间皆瑞祥。

华夏复兴逢盛世，自由相恋爱飞扬。

谢：不是好人君赐玉
——
郎女隔河望雨烟，七夕一聚话千般。
恨言西母行无忌，知是天庭更腐贪。

谢：三秦雪翁君雅和——
皆道天庭佑善良，缘何牛女泪汪汪？
可怜耕种难温饱，那有钱财孝玉皇！

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